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Pidurangala - Sri Lanka

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~LightArtist May 3, 2009, 7:08:35 PM
I like this image alot. the stairs automatically pull your eyes up right into the forest, This is someplace I'd love to see. I think this image could be improved a little if the red/yellow cast was removed. I think as well (subjective as I am) that m a y b e moving the camera a little to the right would use rule of thirds a little better as your eye would be drawn up the stairs into the first third of the image. But again thats a random opinion, and how I would do things. A touch more contrast would really make the trees pop !

all in all I really like this :)

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~CabbyHat May 3, 2009, 7:10:55 PM
The contrasting shades of green and red are really striking. I love the way the eye is drawn up the stairs and through the screen of trees at the top - who knows what could be behind them? :)

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~jay90 May 3, 2009, 7:23:42 PM
I like the position or view how the steps creep from the side and up into the center of the pic. I guess im sayin the steps catch my attention through out the pic. great pic
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*postaldude66 May 4, 2009, 4:48:03 AM
Definetley a place i should travel to and hike up, nice composition.

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=farcry77 May 4, 2009, 8:28:54 PM
Thank u David :hug:

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=farcry77 May 4, 2009, 8:29:10 PM
Im glad u liked the composition. Thank u :)

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=farcry77 May 4, 2009, 8:29:37 PM
Thanks a lot my dear friend. Climb up this place is a tiring experience.

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~CabbyHat May 4, 2009, 8:55:09 PM
I'd imagine so!

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